While
football may just be the symbol of American sports, it has some incredibly
clear risks. The only way to defend an offense is to tackle them. The issue
that has become worse and worse over the years is the fact that as more and
more equipment is introduced, players feel safer when they make more dangerous
tackles. This leads to more concussions, more injuries, and more ended careers.
Meanwhile, rugby, a seemingly more dangerous sport, is responsible for less
concussions. This is due to the way in which the players make tackles. In his
piece, “The Dangers of Safety Equipment,” Michael Munger uses Rogerian
argumentation and references to famous football figures and teams to persuade
his audience that football tackling has become more and more dangerous and that
it needs to be replaced by rugby tackling.
Munger
uses Rogerian argumentation to acknowledge (and refute) the opposing point of
view. While he is all in favor of safer tackling, he recognizes the reasons for
the current tackling methods. He proclaims that “almost everyone believes that the helmet-first tackling
style is more effective […] Anyone who avoids delivering a blow
to avoid ringing the guy’s bell is a wimp, and he also risks missing the
tackle.” Based on purely these statements, head-on tackling seems like the way
to go. However, Munger goes on to counter this point, explaining that there are
alternatives to such dangerous methods (I’ll get into those alternatives in a
bit). By addressing (and shutting down) the opposition, the author shows that
he has considered current tackling,
and even still disagrees with it. In this sense, he establishes ethos as well,
in that he proves he isn’t going in stuck on one side of the argument.
Munger references famous football figures
and teams in order to establish credibility in his argument. He introduces the
idea of rugby tackling – a much safer way of tackling – and that it should be
incorporated into the NFL. For example, he brings up the Seattle Seahawks, and
the fact that “Pete Carroll (the coach) […] has used rugby
principles for football tackling, as is demonstrated in a video.” In the video,
Carroll shares his own opinion on tackling, and he agrees with Munger. They
both feel that rugby-like tackling can be very effective, while at the same
time reduce the risk of concussion. In referencing Pete Carroll, Munger shows
that his ideas aren’t just coming from some random person – they are supported
by many, including the head coach of a Super Bowl-winning team. If Munger were
not to incorporate these mentions, the reader would have a much tougher time
accepting his proposal.
Ultimately,
Michael Munger makes a very strong argument. As just the average writer, he may
not have been quite reliable in arguing well-established rules. However,
through his Rogerian argumentation and football-based allusions, he makes a
powerful appeal to ethos and successfully substantiates his argument.
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